Example Essay

1. Exercise: Analyze an essay

   1. Yes
   2. Yes (The use of biofuel can decrease greenhouse gases, reduce organic waste and decrease environmental destructions and damages.)
   3. Yes (The production and use of biofuels decrease the greenhouse gases in the environment. Corn may be one of the best options for biofuel. The decomposition of organic wastes is another worrisome source of pollution in the world today that the use of biofuels could reduce. Environmental destructions and damages are going to decrease because the production of use of biofuels is not as harmful as the process used in refining oil to create petroleum products, not to mention their use. In contrast to such an invasive and destructive process of extraction, making biofuels will never damage environment so profoundly.)
   4. Yes
   5. Yes
   6. Yes
   7. Yes
   8. Yes
   9. Yes (Using biofuels as an alternative source of energy is an ideal way to provide energy and take better care of the planet.)
   10. Prediction

Prewriting

1. Exercise: Revise thesis statements (Answers will vary, examples provided)

   1. The negative impacts of the legalization of marijuana can be solved in three ways.
   2. Although many oppose animal testing, this practice solves many important medical concerns.
   3. Because testing on animals is not necessary, the industries currently using this form of testing can instead use other methods.

Writing

1. Exercise: Write a body paragraph

   1. Answers will vary, no examples provided

Revising

1. Exercise: Check your essay

   1. Answers will vary, no examples provided

2. Exercise: Revise for unity and development

   1. Answers will vary, no examples provided