TOEFL Writing AK

Integrated Writing

1. Exercise: Analyze example responses (Answers may vary, examples provided)

   1. The second example has more details and is structured in paragraphs. The first one does not follow a pattern (listening --> reading).

Independent Writing

1. Exercise: Analyze example responses (Answers may vary, examples provided)

   1. The second example is more developed. The first example is less formal. The second paragraph in the first example is not cohesive. The hook in the second example is not good. The first example does not have a clear thesis statement.