Now that your planning stage is complete, you can begin writing your draft. Your writing should be organized, developed, accurate, and original. During the entire time you draft your body paragraphs, keep in mind what your focus should be. By the time you finish writing a body paragraph, your reader should clearly understand why you believe that your topic sentence is true.
One way that you can create strong supporting ideas for a body paragraph is by carefully choosing the vocabulary that best represents your ideas.
Because descriptive writing is characterized by detailed and interesting illustrations, word choice is a very important writing skill. For this writing practice, we will focus on incorporating new and more specific words to emphasize your meaning.
A challenge with introducing new vocabulary into your writing is appropriately including a new word into a sentence. There are three important parts of word knowledge to consider before including the word: part of speech, connotations vs definitions, and collocations.
Think of how in the fictional books you read in English the word said might be replaced with screamed, sighed, commanded, told, whispered, or claimed. These words all have the basic definition of a verb for speak, but they carry extra meaning that gives more information to the reader.
Be aware that some vocabulary may also have an expression (phrase) that could be used instead of a single word. For example, someone may say excited, but the expression I'm pumped or I'm looking forward to it or He's bouncing off the walls also mean the same thing.
One step that may be helpful is making a list of adjectives and adverbs that more accurately describe the person and their impact on others. A thesaurus is a great place to look for synonyms:
Most of the words you encounter when looking for synonyms or translating words from your first language will be in the same part of speech: noun, verb, adjective, adverb. However, it is possible that you will find a word that changes to a different word form.
Now that you've practiced looking at descriptive words and synonyms in isolation, you need to start thinking about how the words are actually used in setences.
As mentioned in the previous exercise, it is important to check that the part of speech of your synonym is the same. This is the first step to knowing how to include it in a new sentence.
Sometimes, a synonym that uses a different part of speech is the best word for the job. Other times, you may find that the sentence you want to write would be most clear if you change the form of the word on your list.
The word synonym can be deceptive. As mentioned with the word said, a synonym can add meaning. Sometimes this additional meaning, or connotation, is clear in the definition.
An important note is that connotation is largely determined by culture. A direct translation of a word can often lose an intended connotation or gain one accidentally. An example of this can be seen within the general culture of the United States with words like fat, chubby, skinny, or slim. While the dictionary definition of these words may simply describe the physical shape of a person, there is often a cultural connotation to such descriptions that could be seen as offensive.
When the dictionary does not provide enough information to know the connotation of a new word, the additional meaning can often be found by viewing example sentences. Look at the example sentences below for said and state. Can you recognize a difference in meaning now?
After looking at a few additional example sentences, you may come to the conclusion that tell has an additional level of detail.
In addition to knowing the part of speech and full meaning of a word, you will need to be aware of any grammar patterns that are connected to that word. The part of speech is one step in this direction, but it does not give you the full information about how the word is commonly included in actual written English.
A collocation is a word that frequently occurs together with a target vocabulary word. Likely as you have memorized verbs, you will have noticed that there is a particular preposition that goes with it.
There are also times that a collocation (particularly a preposition or adverb) can create a phrasal verb. A phrasal verb creates a completely new meaning when the words are found together.
Because a collocation can either be required to complete the grammatical unit or can signal a change in meaning, it is important to look for clues about a new vocabulary word before trying to include it in a sentence.
Throughout this chapter of the textbook, you have looked at how to select vocabulary that provides more specific detail than the low-hanging fruit* of the most common words of English. As you write your short descriptive essay, pay special attention to the words you choose. Is the meaning clear and direct? Is the word form used appropriately for the grammar of your sentence? Have you checked to ensure any new vocabulary words match the intended meaning?
*Low-hanging fruit: obvious or easy choice or action
As a final note, it is important to remember that at the college level, your writing will have a main purpose other than to describe. The description adds to the overall impact of your writing, but there is such thing as too much description. Be careful not to overwhelm your reader with so much description that your actual purpose is lost.
Since the purpose of this essay is to isolate the language skills needed for descriptive writing, you do not need to worry too much about this here. However, look carefully at the feedback you receive from the teacher. Are there supporting ideas that are over-described? Are there additional places where descriptions would enhance the writing?
Make a list of vocabulary that would be useful in describing the person you are writing about. Along with the list of words you already know, try making a new vocabulary list of synonyms that you can try to include in your writing.
creative: clever, innovative, original, gifted, inspired, resourceful, prolific
1. Practice with the following words. First find a more descriptive synonym and double check the part of speech.
2. Next, write a sentence for each of the words above. Some sentences may be exactly the same with just one word replaced, while others may need additional changes.
In this exercise, you will practice changing your word to a different part of speech so it can be used in a different way in your sentence.
1. Change the part of speech of the synonyms you chose.
2. Write a sentence for each of the synonyms using them in this new word form.
1. Consider the connotations of the underlined words below. How does the meaning shift? Does the dictionary definition clearly show you the difference in use?
2. Now check the connotations and definition differences between the provided synonyms and the one you selected from the previous exercise. How does the meaning shift? Does the dictionary definition clearly show you the difference in use?
Read the words below. They have similar dictionary definitions but different connotations. Write a sentence for each word in the pair that demonstrates your understanding of the differences in meaning.