Integrated Writing (Audience & Register)

Audience & Register

Just as with all writing, integrated writing is more successful when you have considered the intended audience and appropriate register for the assignment. The added challenge here is that the audience and register of the original sources may differ from your assignment and may even vary between the sources themselves.

Audience

The audience is who will be reading your writing. The important part of audience to keep in mind when you write using sources is: what can you assume the reader knows? What information in the sources would be important to give context or definitions for? Are there terms or details that you can choose not to include because your reader would be expected to already have taht information?

When you are integrating sources into a typical research paper for this class, you usually assume that your reader does not have more than a general background knowledge on the topic. Any specific terminology, references to specific events, or explanations of processes should be introduced clearly. However, there are times like in a history course at the university level, when you can assume that your professor is familiar with key political figures or geographic locations. 

In other situations, such as the TOEFL, a definition may be provided for you in the text or in the lecture. It is safe to assume that restating that definition would be appropriate. 

Register

Register is used in writing to refer to tone, specifically in reference to formality. The source material should match the tone of your own writing. A formal academic essay should be using sources that are written with the same formal tone. This means that you should be careful in your paraphrases and summaries of the text to match the language choices the author used.

Tone is very important because in conveys a layer of meaning as well. It is often not just important to understand  what was said, but also how it was said. When you choose your words, match the tone. You do not want to use words like criticizesclaims, or objects to introduce the words of someone else unless the tone of that word actually matches how the source was written.

Exercises

Exercise 1: Identify Audience and Register Differences

Take a look at these different sources. Who is the audience for each of these? How do you know? What differences in register do you notice?

Exercise 2: Integrated Writing (Audience/Register Focus)

1. Watch this video from BYU Dining Services explaining the on campus food services.

2. Below is a link to an opinion article written for the BYU newspaper The Daily Universe about the Cannon Center, which is one of the popular cafeteries on BYU campus. Read through the article. You may take notes on the main points to use as a reference.

Daily Universe: Opinion Article 

3. Consider the services presented by BYU Dining and the complaint written by a BYU student. Write a response to this opinion article for the school newspaper. Do you agree with the student that the dining services at BYU are insufficient or inconvient for students? Why or why not? Offer a solution to the problem presented in this opinion article.

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