CoverObjectivesThe Writing ProcessAddressing the PromptPrewritingWritingRevisingOriginalityTimed Writing 1Integrated Writing 1Essay Shape and OrganizationIntroduction ParagraphsBody ParagraphsConclusion ParagraphsReference PageA Shifting StructureExample EssayTimed Writing 2Integrated Writing 2Descriptive EssaysExample Descriptive EssayPrewritingWriting: Word ChoiceSources: QuotingRevisingRevise a Descriptive EssayExplore Other Genres: Creative WritingTimed Writing 3Integrated Writing 3Personal StatementsExample Personal StatementTypes of Personal StatementsOrganization for Comprehensive Personal StatementOrganization for Prompted Personal StatementWriting: DevelopmentRevisingRevise a Personal StatementExplore Other Genres: Formal EmailsTimed Writing 4Integrated Writing 4Cause-Effect EssaysExample Cause-Effect EssayPrewritingWriting: UnitySources: SummarizingRevisingRevise a Cause-Effect EssayExplore Other Genres: ReviewsTimed Writing 5Integrated Writing 5Persuasive EssaysExample Persuasive EssayPrewritingWriting: CohesionSources: ParaphrasingRevisingRevise a Persuasive EssayExplore Other Genres: ReflectionsTimed Writing 6Integrated Writing 6Appendix A: Argumentative EssaysExample Argumentative EssayStructure of an ArgumentPrewritingWriting: Cohesion in ArgumentsRevisingRevise an Argumentative EssayAppendix B: Using SourcesFinding SourcesIn-text CitationsMore about Reference PagesAppendix C: Extra TOEFL ResourcesTOEFL Integrated WritingTOEFL Independent Writing
University Prep Winter Writing C

Integrated Writing 4

Audience & Register

Just as with all writing, integrated writing is more successful when you have considered the intended audience and appropriate register for the assignment. The added challenge here is that the audience and register of the original sources may differ from your assignment and may even vary between the sources themselves.

This means that as you mentally prepare to write for your specific audience, you need to consider the audience of the source and make some adjustments to fit a new context. As you learned in the last integrated writing chapter, you can change the wording through paraphrase, but you should not change the meaning itself. 

Exercises

Exercise 4.28: Identify Audience and Register Differences

Take a look at these different sources. Who is the audience for each of these? How do you know? What differences in register do you notice?

Exercise 4.29: Integrated Writing (Audience/Register Focus)

Below is a department email sent to all students in your major. Read through the announcement of the change to the program. Then choose one of the additional sources. Using information from both sources, write an email explaining your situation and goals.

Department announcement:

The University has recently made a significant push toward increasing experiential learning during the undergraduate experience. Those who have graduated having taken advantage of such experiences report that it was fundamental in to their learning. As more colleges shift toward this type of learning, expanding experiential learning here will help our graduates be more competitive in the job market. Effective next semester, the department will require all students in this major to register for an off-campus internship directly related to the coursework. 

Because this program of study change will impact a large number of students, we suggest that you contact your faculty advisor as soon as possible to set an appointment to discuss this new requirement. Your advisor will help you to make any necessary changes to your plan for coursework and can connect you to internship opportunities, which is especially crucial if you hope to do your internship outside of Provo. Although the credits will be primarily given based off of the work you do through the internship, you will report throughout the semester to your faculty advisor and meet for an online class every other week. To get the add code for the internship course, you will need to (1) meet with your faculty advisor and (2) write a short proposal explaining how this internship connects to your coursework and professional goals.

Additional sources:

  1. Email from faculty advisor: Hello. I would be happy to meet with you, but I'm out of town for the next two weeks. I can see that you have already registered for a heavy load of courses next semester. Are you planning to graduate soon? Or would you be able to delay taking any of these courses? I'm concerned that adding an internship would make the semester too demanding. Let me know what your plan is, and I'll get back to you when I'm back in the office.
  2. Comment from a professor in class: Actually, I have been doing some consulting work with the local museum about community engagement. It's been eye-opening, but I honestly haven't had as much time to dedicate to the project as I originally hoped for. So if any of you are interested in something like that, you can send me an email or stop by my office for more details.
  3. Email from a friend: It's so good to hear from you! Yes, I'm doing an internship in Chicago right now, and it has been so great! Are you interested in doing an internship here too? What requirements do you have? I can see if I can put in a good word for you!!